⌗WEP-OCTOBER 2021-Crossing the Bridge

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This month The Scream by Edward Munch

Crossing the Bridge

The rays glanced off the rugged tip of the mountain and hit the rocks she was staring at. It felt like she had been shuffling and stumbling on this goat path for years. Yusef was skipping ahead as though they were on some kind of mad adventure. He criss-crossed in front of her, from time to time, crouching to look at a beetle or a brilliant bloom. Arysa wished she could behold her surroundings with her son’s gaze. The smallest detail in the landscape seemed a window into wonder. The border appeared eons away; a day or two at the most now but so many unforeseen events could still befall them. Arysa felt her shoulders buckle at the thought.

    Her mind wandered back to her native village in the green hills, the sparkle of the river as it rushed over polished stones. The coy girl which she was then, had envisioned the future stretching  bright and carefree on the horizon. Omar was a catch: handsome, hard-working, tall and strong with a mischievous glint in his eye which made her laugh. Arysa’s father toiled on a small patch of earth; they harvested enough though to survive and trade the surplus. Homely rituals lent rhythm to the seasons under a dry, clear sky.
    First the Soviets had come; Omar and her father fought them behind boulders among the tracks and bracken in which the invader fumbled. They couldn’t just roll in with their tanks and flatten all resistance like they had in so many territories. Omar’s glint dimmed but Arysa had said nothing. A wrinkle had appeared in her forehead.

    “Mama, look,” shouted Yusef, wrenching her from her reverie.

On the crest of the hill stood a stone temple: a mound pilled with rocks and covered with red, yellow, orange garlands, spiked with fading white petals; a serendipitous reprieve to her clouding thoughts. Yusef was already running around the cairn while she quickened her pace, gusto in her step and faith slowly expanding in her breast. The sight cast a glow in the despairing hills. Arysa smelled for the first time in months a clear, spring whiff in the air.
    “Yusef, respect the place. It is a gift for worship and hope,” she said as she came abreast.

The burden lifted slightly from the pit of her bowels and she remembered Kohar and Yusef, when tiny, prattling together in the meadow at sunset, immersed in some imaginary game. When the skirmishes started between opposing factions, Omar had decided to move them to Kabul. Several farms had been pillaged, hired hands murdered. The furrow between his eyebrows deepened but still Arysa had said nothing. Kohar became sullen in the city as though his true self had stayed in the hills, buried in the dirt, discarded like an old pair of linen. Again Arysa hadn’t protested.
She brushed away the thoughts with a few strands of hair framing her cheeks and opened her heart to the joy etched on Yusef’s face while he scrutinised every crevice of the temple from which rolled pieces of paper protruded.    
    “Shall we leave one too ?” she asked him.
    “Oh, yes ! Please Mama. You write, I’ll phrase the message.” Yusef clapped his fingers.

Arysa lifted the bag from her back, patting down the pockets in search of her small notebook. Triumphant, she extracted it finally from a thick pouch in the lining.
    “So Yusef, what shall we thank and wish for ?”
    ” ‘Thank you for this sprig of flowers, the strength to continue our journey. Please keep us safe until we reach our destination and be reunited with our distant cousins‘ ,” said Yusef, loud and solemn.
    “Beautiful my son. Here you go, choose where to place it”
Yusef stood on the toes of his boots and slid the scroll into a smooth hole between two gold-leafed pebbles.
        They looked back once more towards the breeze in the wreaths and heard the tinkle of the bells. The winding path stretched before them down a slope, lost between boulders and shrubs. More peaks towered in the distance, some glistening in the afternoon light. Arysa wondered if she would ever cross the bridge of her sorrow and let go of her pain.


In Kabul, Omar had found work in an uncle’s grocery shop, sorting, piling, fetching: strenuous hours in the dust and pollution. The drone had hit the school the third year and they had brought Kohar’s dismembered corpse back to their tiny lodgings. Arysa’s scream had given way to wailing. Then for weeks, she roamed the room and streets of the city in a haze. Her mind could not fathom the future, an end to the bridge towards a possible tomorrow. Omar, distant, had grown more and more estranged and finally had lost himself to days with shady connections. Arysa had not been able to mouth any words to describe his new loyalties. Yusef stayed home with her and silently she packed the flotsam of their past. She had made her choice. They would face the long road together to join their distant family in Tajikistan. Her heart screamed in her chest but Arysa would say no more.

Word Count 872 FCA

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38 thoughts on “⌗WEP-OCTOBER 2021-Crossing the Bridge

  1. This was beautifully done! The refugee’s scream resonates for so many right round the world. I hope Arysa and Yusef will be able to cross over to Tajikistan and make a new life for themselves. The cairn’s a note of hope. Thank you for this moving entry for WEP.

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  2. This story is powerful, filled with beauty and devastation. It both broke my heart and gave me hope. Truly wonderfully done. I hope Arysa andYusef make it to safety.

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  3. Another desperately sad story coming out of that torn country. I wish I could believe in healing for the region, but I’ll settle for a happy ending for Arysa and Yusef.

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  4. Hi Susan,

    You have captured such a bitter-sweet situation. Leaving one’s homeland for a better life is so emotional and difficult. Arysa’s pain is felt with every step she takes, but her light-hearted son is the joy of the future in a new land. Beautifully written.

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  5. Hi Miss Susan, Lenny here as I can’t comment on your blog. I’ve asked Miss Denise to comment for me. I don’t have Twitter, Facebook or WordPress so I have no other way of commenting.

    What an intense and powerful story. The imagery is great. The cairn made me think of how past, present, and future are linked together. For me this is a happy/sad story. Sad for the trials and tribulations of war and happy there is hope of crossing the bridge into a better life. Thank you for this story.

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  6. It makes me so sad to think of all those who live in a place that is almost constantly at war. I think you captured the horrors of such a life well.

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